An overcrowded flower bed, buzzing with summer, smells of one thousand sweet scents. The door of the house swings open letting out the bubble of silly conversation. The constant hum of a lawn mower calms all worried thoughts. This is a place of relaxation, but also a place of fun; the new puppy from the farm house bounds into the kitchen skidding on the slippery floor, each person is inspected and with one contented bark, he is on his way again.
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